Word like Fear

Well I can’t hold anything back now

Not a damn thing back now

Look at me dying here

I can’t help hiding here

 

There’s something in the stratosphere

Something in a word like fear

 

Something’s really hiding now

Someone’s really dying now

I can’t speak a word right here

Not a single word

 

There’s something in the candle light

Something in the word delight

 

Mutilating and suffocating

As a matter of fact it may be exasperating

Tantalizing and capturing

Now that I have spilled the beans

I must take my leave            

Reviews

[mandy]

dying, fear of death, hiding, speechless with fright....i liked all that, nice flow, etc, ...

[Barbara Walker]

I would take my leave, too, if I were dying and hiding. Like the lines...There's something in the stratosphere, something in a word like fear.

[Ruth]

Spilling the emotion with metaphorical ease and claustrophobic tension!
Awesome xo

[J. Viands]

Thanks the story for it will be posted eventually

[Ruth]

Most welcome xo