One Life

One Life

A Chapter by Dhaye
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We have only one

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A life to live, a smile to make
A beauty I have to share
A simple word for someone's sake
Though life seems so unfair

A morning call, a short "hello"
A tap on somebody's back
A simple "yes", instead of "no"
Could be somebody's luck

A simple touch, a goodnight kiss
Could warm a frozen world
A soulful hug, I'll always miss
Surely when I get old

But once this life that I shall pass
Brings me to a peaceful place
I'll face the day, not how it was
But a life that's full of grace.


© 2014 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
A writing exercise

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The simple things become the important things.
"A simple touch, a goodnight kiss
Could warm a frozen world
A soulful hug, I'll always miss
Surely when I get old "
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I wrote one about what a simple act of kindness can do will check and see if you've read it if not will send request.You have great rhythm and flow in this poem

Bill

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

W R Stowe

10 Years Ago

"Another Day" and I think I sent you a read request and you're very welcome
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Ah, sorry...I cannot receive any read request because it has been closed because of flooding of requ.. read more
W R Stowe

10 Years Ago

The title was "Another Day"
The simple things become the important things.
"A simple touch, a goodnight kiss
Could warm a frozen world
A soulful hug, I'll always miss
Surely when I get old "
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be kind and compassionate in life is not that difficult. You never know how much happiness you can add to another person's life with a simple smile or kind word. What a warm and wonderful write this is, Dh. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Living life gracefully is an art. Sometimes simple gestures of selflessness can go a long way in making our world a better place. Great sentiments very well expressed. Much appreciated Dhaye.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Divya.
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

It was a pleasure for me Dhaye!
Very nicely done, I love the flow of the poem. You accidentally used 'warmth' for 'warm' in "Could warm a frozen world". I agree with the sentiment of this poem. Kindness to others is always the best philosophy of life to have.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much especially the correction you mentioned, Eddie. I was writing the poem on-the-spot.. read more
Very precious thought. Great like a thinker and monk of good life. Very beautifully express the thought.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, ssadd. :)
Saddam

11 Years Ago

most welcome dear...
i love the brevity and the optimism of this piece. We never really know how an act of kindness could change another one's journey.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

I hope I did not give you any reading problem regarding the font size of my latest writings posted .. read more
gabrielle

11 Years Ago

I "zoomed" it. :)

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Dhaye

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..