Renascent

being reborn

Deep slumber took me 

To a place of enigma 

Nowhere to stand I wandered, 

I float Like a million years 

I begged and prayed to see 

My feet on the ground 

My renascent frame 

Hungry to walk a mile 

For a quest of reason 

Of this afterlife

Author's Note

Word for the Day: renascent

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

A nice portrayal of a soul awaiting rebirth.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just as in this life....in any other life we might have...considering the possibility of reincarnation...or just a spiritual existence after our mortal one...we want to find relevance for ourselves...we need to have that.

this one made me close my eyes and dream of what may be.

[ms. barrie]

very thought-provoking, entwined with intriguing imagery.
amazing dictation and word play. thanks for sharing
~ xx - barrie

[Dhaye]

Oh, I see. New look, new name. Lol

This is a writing exercise for me. Thank you for spending your time in this short piece, B.

[ms. barrie]

I just caught this...you're very welcomed...lol yep time for
a change. the pleasure was/is all mine
xx - me