When I Die

When I Die

A Poem by Dhaye
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When it happens...

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When I die, please give me a Daisy
You know it's my fave, please don't be lazy

When I die, please sing me a song
Sing it while my body is being buried to where it should belong

When I die, please look at me again
You can write a poem about me with your favorite pen

When I die, please read an old poem for me
Or you can make an artwork that only my soul can see

You can do everything, my love, everything you will
When I die, do it for me with your love as the strongest seal. 

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*Originally written on Oct. 1, 2015

© 2016 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
This was written for a contest.

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this is beautifully composed and i loved this line to no extinct "When I die, please read an old poem for me
Or you can make an artwork that only my soul can see " its so beautiful! keep writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not, at all, unreasonable expectations.
Lovely sentiments, Dhaye.
An outstanding write!


Posted 9 Years Ago


I enjoyed the poem dear friend.
"You can do everything, my love, everything you will
When I die, do it for me with your love as the strongest seal.  "
I liked the above line. I liked the wish and the need. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


WoW!!!!
Beautiful......beautiful....
full of sadness......but also hope and love......
brilliant write....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the nice words, P.
Death is not the end when we have loved ones to keep our memory alive.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, sir
kind of an uplifting poem about death...those last wishes...but with a smile.
i'm looking for my favorite pen, right now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading this, sir.

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Dhaye
Dhaye

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..