Raw and Unarmed

From my song with same title

I gave you my heart raw and unarmed
Every word I said was a fire uncharmed
You held my soul like a fragile flame
Now you're gone but I feel no shame

You left your mark like ink on my skin
A story that starts but can’t begin
Your silence echoes, it fills the air
But I don't chase ghosts coz they're never there

Every scar’s a map, every tear’s a song
I won’t erase what’s been all along
The fire may fade but it never dies
It flickers softly under the skies

The love was real, it burned so bright
It lit the dark, it fought the night
No regrets and no blame
The love was real, it stays the same.

Song link:
https://suno.com/s/lyJRa4gvshkHfzlR

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

that was beautiful, but heartbreaking.

[Neha agrawal]

This is raw, beautiful, and deeply moving. Every line carries weight and grace. It’s heartbreak wrapped in strength and it lingers. Loved it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Another beautiful song. You are such a talented songwriter.

j.

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much Sir J.