Making Love To A Marlboro

Almost naked except
A dangling Marlboro cigarette  

Expertly stroking his lover
Fingers caress a slender body

Methodically engulfing aroma
The sweet smell of sex

Swollen lips surround
Waves of rapture quiver

Eyelashes and eyeballs flutter
Sinking into oblivion

Head bobbing like a pendulum
Savoring lingering lust

Inhaling smoke languidly
Sucking every undying toxin

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

Brilliant.. love the duality in your metaphor.. someone get me a cigarette.. I want to see if I get the same feeling... I need one now.. damn that was "SMOKING HOT".

[Robin]

love the duality of your euphoric metaphor ~

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. ah, intense ... and ... absolutely brilliantly written ...