DANCING ON DREAM'S STAIRWAY

Inspired by Tovli's Ten Contest with the underlined phrases included as per the rules. (60 words in all)

 

 

 

 

  I will dance to the moon field on dream stairways

all the way singing of the first time I met you...

Memories surface like small mud springs again

blushing hot like my cheeks...

What do you see I say as I jump up to make tea

Do you remember the time we...

But you simply sleep oblivious of my ramblings

 

 

 

(c) Helena May 2009

 

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

so very beautiful, really liked this write

[Tovli]

can you believe, I just found this? This is so beautiful--how I wish it could have been "judged" with the others.

[Tony]

This is excellent, What I see so clearly is someone day dreaming of precious moments experienced and wanting to talk about them with that person you shared them with, so long ago, it seems as though you will share your thoughts alone, this night. Very well writtten piece.

Tony

[Shellie]

really well done again with the required words for the contest you mention. naturally done and brilliant effct!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very sweet atmospheric feel to this piece... it gives a wonderful chill down the spine.

[angelina neves]

wonderful dance with the words given! Beautiful idea!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very good entry. Well written

[Anastasia Starlena]

Beautiful euphoric piece. A truly wonderful poem with captivating imagery. The picture is beautiful as well.