My Day

A little ditty from a prompt about Maya Deren.

It wasn't like the day leaked

It was rubbery and naked

Dancing wasn't an option

Do you hear what I'm saying?

Full of truth and knocked about

But it didn't leak

Author's Note

Happy Sunday!!!

Reviews

[Laurierose]

Perseverance is what makes us stronger and the truth may hurt but it's what makes us and shouldn't break us. Because the truth is as real as reality and as long as it's there so should we be. We may bend but breaking isn't an option. Great read.

[Crowley]

Thanks so much!!!

[kyam]

nice poem, I like that the day didn't leak. Original. I also liked the way it flowed. Kept your mind busy thinking. It was great art. I wanted more actually. Writing is great for real. Kyam

[Ed Hart]

yes, so many days with no dancing, so busy being knocked about by not just truth, but naked truth, the kind that leaves blisters and brushes; but we can take it, long as there's no leaks, leaks are always tears or blood or both, but what the hell, happy sunday to you too my friend who brings fire wood and cigars to a wayfaring camper

[Crowley]

MEXICO!!!!! Thanks for stopping by. food to see you my friend.

[Devons]

Clever and entertaining phraseology, yet always with a wise intent, and intelligently philosophical.
It occurs to me that frequently you are able to reflect a clear image by presenting a distorted one somehow. Like a magician with smoke and mirrors. Always artful and debonair, but with a devious mind at work.