Buying a New Day

Trying to pay attention...

Reflecting and not so softly on a life in limbo

Causes a person to check his pockets for coin

Buying clarity isn't the same as tripping over it

Cheap plastic focus glamour's the quick fix

Only to return a man to the starting blocks

Cursing the broken piece you can't find on Craig's List.

Author's Note

Damn Craig's list...

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Whoa, the metaphorical introspection of this piece is amazing. You've laid a precise pen to this... excellently done!

[Crowley]

Thanks man!!! I appreciate the time spent!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was worth every second.

[emmajoy]

Indeed, damn and damn again! Could you clarify the fourth line, please; have tried inserting my own punctuated reading aloud.. but..

Reconstructed clarity can't or doesn't exist.. surely? There's always something lost in translation, perhaps. Still wondering..

[Crowley]

Cheap plastic focus meaning self help, or things you can buy to make yourself feel better, glamour like vampire glamour where they can make you see what you want to see. Thanks Girl!!!

[Crowley]

Maybe I should fix that line....hmmm.

[emmajoy]

Sorry, just need to understand to fully appreciate your intention...

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Nothing like a rogue Queen to throw the lipstick off eh? Im really trying to be quiet...its like the morgue out here! I think it's YOU making all the noise!lol shhh with your talent....

[Crowley]

Only with you're help, this is a record for reviews in one day for me! I love it!