Shades of Destiny

Keep on dreaming...

I stirred wooden thoughts into the universe today

Cryptic, half-baked, unset, hardly what you would call formed

And in the mailbox of my mind, a package came

Addressed to "the thinker" of all things

 

I have as much control as a drunken race car driver

But the universe sits watch and waits to do you favors

If you check the mail daily and tip the postman

Your dreams will arrive in boxes wrapped in cosmic foil

 

Keep the boxes close and numbered with sweet priority

Then use what the stars give you and not sparingly

Not a dream will pass unnoticed, so dream big, dream beautiful

And color your life with the shades of destiny, found only in your mind

Author's Note

That universe, she's a peach.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.
"Keep the boxes close and numbered with sweet priority
Then use what the stars give you and not sparingly
Not a dream will pass unnoticed, so dream big, dream beautiful
And color your life with the shades of destiny, found only in your mind"
Dream big and enjoy everyday. Do one thing you enjoy. Thank you Crowley for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Crowley]

Put it out there, it usually comes back. Thanks so much for the kind words!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Mrudula Rani]

Very uplifting poem beautiful in every respect; loved the style and message in your poem. A colorful life is what we all dream and wish for all.

[Crowley]

Dream on!!! and Thank you again!!!

[Mrudula Rani]

It's entirely my pleasure. Bom fim de semana ( have a good weekend)

[Chris Shaw]

We all need to dream and dream big. Never give up on your dreams, without them what is there? Love this poem. What a great read. Thank you Crowley.

Chris

[Crowley]

thank you for reading it!!! I got my dreams...and I love them!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Well wrap me in foil and call me dreamy...or should we be wrapping YOU! This is warm and sunny without all this dreaded heat and humidity. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

[Crowley]

Yeah this is my upbeat side!!! Ohhh this heat is driving me crazy, I mean it is hot for 6 months here anyway but it has been more humid this year and it is killing me.

[Mr. Malarkey]

The beautiful thing is, anyone can be a dreamer regardless of who they are and where they came from. Anything is possible. Thanks for sharing!

[Crowley]

Thanks so much for the review!!!

[sette]

this poem brings out the imaginative side of me.. it makes me want to visualize beyond what i can see reality wise.

[Crowley]

thanks Sette, hope this Wednesday finds you doing well!

[¿]

Greatly amazing!! This enhances the energy of dreamers to dream more big then they do...at least it does that for me...I loved reading your imaginary...and after reading once I scrolled the page backwards to the second stanza...that's splendid...am dreamin' and will keep dreamin'
Thanks for sharing this great read! :)

[Crowley]

Thanks Tashin!!! I want everyone to keep dreaming!!!

[¿]

Guess what!...me too! You're heartedly welcome :)

[Crowley]

Hey, how come I can't review most of your writing anymore? The writing is there but there is no space to review it?

[¿]

Hehe....told you!! :)