Membership has it's Rewards

She opened the speak easy port peering perfectly

White skin

Pink cheeks

Green eyes…f**k

 

She whispered my name in tones to die for

Red lips

Sultry voice

Soft lilt…glow

 

Her breath smelled like ice and licorice

Warm smile

Cool breeze

Ice crystal words…breathless

 

She asked me for the password

Fogged mind

Beauty trance

Winter queen…perfect

 

“A frozen kiss,” I whisper

Lengthening grin

Quick beats

Gentle click…sigh

 

You realize once you enter

Pushed door

Sheer sundress

Marble smooth…lust

 

You are a member for life

Soft kiss

Cool touch

Card carrying…member

Reviews

[Neville]

f**k I like green eyes.. I like blue ones too and hazel and brown ones.. sheesh I dont mind pink ones either, nor purple, amber, red, black and vermilion... I got a thing about eyes ya see... its ears I have a problem with .. they gotta be either silver or... Hey... sorry Crowley.. yeah sign me up for a years full membership.. I just hope my member can keep up with you and Bad Bunny .... N :)

[Pete]

good creative flow. wonder if one can run a tab too? tipping optional? maybe Patriot's owner Bob Kraft would know ... :)

[Robert Trakofler]

Me too... i want in! what is the address? i got the password down... huh huh i don't care what it cost what? A no rodent clause in the charter nooooooooooooo! The thought flow is perfect in the dialogue following the narration a kind of peek into the minds movement. I'ts a good thing they didn't accept me as a member as generally i would never frequent an establishment that would. The portrait of the winter queen is delicious and I'm glad i didn't meet her for it would takes months of searching to find all the lost pieces after my inevitable disappointment and rejection. A very nice feel and flow to these lines Mr Crowley

[Crowley]

I think we would be the best members...lol. We will get a few others on here and make our own speak easy. Thanks BB I really appreciate the read!!