Lover's Leap

Keeping love alive is important...keep strumming.

When I put you to bed, lamb

It wasn't right not to kiss you on the cheek

 

Hot breath in my ear, id humming

Like the strings on an upright bass

 

Fingers brush lightly across my abdomen and enchant, mint

As flesh accepts not so casual butterflies

 

Your whispers unequivocal, quivering vocals

Make my thoughts bathe in possibilities

 

Dressed in the finest fur, venting passing fears

Wrapping you for warmth and an end to isolation

 

Lapping at your shores, undying devocean

Soup for two in the backseat at Lover's Leap

Reviews

[Neville]

Superlative or summat vaguely similar in meaning would be how I might best leave my mark upon these fine words...

[Crowley]

Lol...right then!!! thanks my man!

[Neville]

superlative aint a combination of suppository and laxative I'll have ya know :)

[Chris Shaw]

A sensual write Crowley with a great play on words. Passion filled devotion. Loved it. A great little write we have here.

Chris

[Crowley]

Thanks Chris!!! It is always a pleasure having you around!!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

A tantric mix of fore and word-play in this sensuous poem. Play and touche, quivering strings of the bass. Exquisite, provacative, evocative. Undying devocean- yes, an absolutely marvelous write!

[Crowley]

Thanks APH!!! Love it when you stop by!

[Saoirse K.]

i love the wordplay you've taken on in this piece
"unequivocal, quivering vocals"
"enchant, mint"
"undying devocean"
like new ways to re-invigorate a relationship
adding new spark to a fire of creativity and passion
between two people
a light piece not weighed down with pretense
but happy to live in it's own world
love it

[Crowley]

Thank you!!! It was one I wrote some time ago and just never posted. I appreciate the review and the kind words!!