Curfew

Take me high

Roll me in your mouth like hard candy

No biting, you'll break a tooth

Besides, I'm something to savor

Lingering long after your curfew

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent, whimsical and intelligent.

[Beccy]

Indoors or outdoors,
whether high or low,
something to savor
will give you a glow. :))

Beccy.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, if it's a parental curfew I'd advise watching out for her old man and his shotgun and as a daddy of girls I can offer that sound bit of advice. (laughing) This little poem is a treat to savor. Love it. F.

[Arundass TP]

Excellent writing. Beautifully constructed words. Enjoyed reading

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. Great imagery.

[Neville]

I must confess I find it hard to type with a mouth full of admiration .. succinctus supurbus mate :)

[Davidgeo]

Savor the flavor... I love it. Good work

[Robert Trakofler]

The only taste this guy has ever left was pure bitterness LOL I wish I could say the later but I have such a temper LOL and the older I get the less I am contented in smiling politely:/ good to see you are still scribbling here and there

[Poetic Beauty]

So I’m guessing this is supposed to be a about drugs but more me and my above average naughty brain it makes me thing of sexual delights and savoring the flavor of someone long after the intimacy has cooled.