Unremarkable

IG said this is a poem...I trust her implicitly and she has my wallet.

Unremarkable

And he crept from beyond the shadows

Where the cruel things 

Twisted in their nature

Homely in their wares

Waited an eternity for just one kiss

And in comparison to him

They were the fair princesses

They were the creamy naked thighs

He was ugly....no....unremarkable

Author's Note

Well there you have it, I have officially worn out my welcome.

Reviews

[Cherrie]

could be a trailer for a story,

[c.m.]

I love the imagery in this one..it's fantastic.

Waited an eternity for just one kiss
And in comparison to him
They were the fair princesses
They were the creamy naked thighs

I love this...just stands out for some reason...very good piece.

[Amy Bumpas]

Love these lines: They were the fair princesses
They were the creamy naked thighs
I am a little insatiable LOL!

[Ed Hart]

when they have your wallet and youy heart we believe anything they say...

[Jenny Nelson]

Well, It certainly is going to hit home with a lot of folks. It's different, which is a good thing. "Unremarkable" That is indeed one of the worse things to be considered. I think it was a very strong piece... Now tell her to give your wallet back; replacing all the plastic is a royal pain. lol

[OkieWonKenokie]

Wow. I love this one. *gigglez* this line:

"They were the creamy naked thighs"

gives you a slight imagery of it. Great write!

I love the lines:

"And he crept from beyond the shadows
Where the cruel things
Twisted in their nature"

[Ms. Gruye]

nope, it's a poem.