Song

work in progress

So many things I'd promised myself
And I just up and broke them
Now I'm broken, broken

You say you can't stop loving me
I just don't know what to believe
You say you tried but can't move on
You say I'll always be the one
But oh, how fleeting words and feelings are
Oh, how fleeting words and feelings are

I blatantly lied to myself
I stood back and watched myself go blind
Didn't listen to anybody else
Didnt even spend time in my own mind

And now I'm paying that price
Doing that time
Bleeding all the poison out

What's done is done
No more to be said
No more beating that creature already dead

Author's Note

eh, I don't consider myself a very good songwriter. I posted mostly because Tarasov requested it.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

I could definatley hear this as a song....
my heart is singing this too, but the words are starting to change...as i find myself, and spend time in my body getting to know myself...
great little piece of work, glad you posted it!

[tarasov]

And you posted one of the most awesome songs ever!
this is so beautiful i can hear it in my head! with your voice singing it so filled with emotion! it's beautiful.
I love you.