A Bruised Summer

A bad marriage from the child's POV

Summer skies are clear and blue,

I promise Mama misses you too;

Summer skies are dull and gray,

Daddy left today;

Summer skies turned bright again,

Mama made a new "friend";

Summer days are ending,

Mamas happy, Daddy's pretending;

-Eleanor M. A.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zack Burton]

That's very interesting. I like the fluctuating rhyme scheme particularly, as well as the theme. However, I don't think you exactly capture the story you're attempting to convey.

But maybe I'm nuts. Maybe I'm wrong. I'm not sure, but I am sure that this is a good work and that you're dern good at writing.