My Saddness Sleeps

Who am I to cry

Now that we are parted

Given time

Pain will subside

 

Memories

of yesterday's dreams

Vanish

An eminent hush

Surrounds my thoughts

And from this moment

I sleep alone

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

This simple, but deeply profound and easily relate able.

I love these lines
"Who am I to cry
Now that we are parted
Given time
Pain will subside

[Leo Gems]

Heartbreakingly sad and lonely write. The emotions portrayed are simple yet the reader can certainly identify with them. At least I do.

Lonely ink! Great job!