Bang.

I stole a peek inside today,

and what peered back left me in dismay.

 

I myself, I must betray,

today I shot myself, and walked away.

 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The hint of a loved one's thought or mind maybe?

[J. Kell]

Very nice poem! I love the ones that keep you guessing. I enjoyed the abruptness of the ending and how you captured that in the title. Great job.

[Heather Hassell]

Thank you, I appreciate it!

[Chaos_Collector]

I loved this part "I stole a peek inside today,
and what peered back left me in dismay." Clever and original stuff right there. There are endless possibilities on the story behind this poem. It's a nice quality. Well done!

[Heather Hassell]

Thank you very much! (:

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome! :)