More of a Teenage Quote.
A Poem by
Vertigoingnowhere
~Friends are a lot like candy. Sweet, when needed and sour at times. Then before you know it, they've changed and dissolved into nothing but a bitter memory left on your tongue. -HSA
© 2013 Vertigoingnowhere
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Interesting observation...but not all memories become bitter..and I know, people can be that mean, leaving your side. I say steer clear of hoes. O_O
Posted 12 Years Ago
To be honest, I don't understand why the memory must be bitter.
Posted 12 Years Ago
To be honest, I don't understand why the memory must be bitter.
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yes, it can be like that...
i have had those kinds of friends....but live long enough and we experience the real friendships...i have some that have lasted 50, 40 , 30 years...
and they are priceless.
Posted 12 Years Ago
yes, it can be like that...
i have had those kinds of friends....but live long enough and we experience the real friendships...i have some that have lasted 50, 40 , 30 years...
and they are priceless.
An interesting thought. The metaphor is solid, and I like it :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
An interesting thought. The metaphor is solid, and I like it :)
Very well put. You are a deep-thinker, me thinks. :) That was very cute, thanks for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very well put. You are a deep-thinker, me thinks. :) That was very cute, thanks for sharing.
you've suddenly got me thinking of jolly ranchers for some reason. succinctly and profoundly written!
Posted 12 Years Ago
you've suddenly got me thinking of jolly ranchers for some reason. succinctly and profoundly written!
That is a good quote! great job!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
That is a good quote! great job!!
I like the quote. Friendship is hard to maintain. A real friend will tell you the truth in good and bad times. A excellent quote.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like the quote. Friendship is hard to maintain. A real friend will tell you the truth in good and bad times. A excellent quote.
Coyote
Yes, we've all been there. A great metaphor. Good work.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Yes, we've all been there. A great metaphor. Good work.
Smart writing, well done! ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Smart writing, well done! ;)
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Vertigoingnowhere Sarasota, FL
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My name is Hannah. I am 18 years old and a senior in high school. To my wonderment I am survived it.
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