Night

The night seems to inspire me

Lifting my head out of my book, I looked out the window. It was dark. I was puzzled. Last I checked it was the beginning of sunset. I looked up at the clock. The time read 10:25. I set down my book and walked over to the window. I put my hand up against the glass. It was cold. As I opened the window, the cool air seemed to brush up against me with a friendly greeting. I shivered. Walking  over to my closet, I grabbed a sweatshirt and pulled it over my head.Going barefoot, i climbed out the window. I stood on the roof and shoved my hands into my pockets. I walked over to the edge where a tree stood. I climbed onto the tree and started to decend. When i reached the bottom i jumped and landed on the cool grassy foor. It was decorated with dew that glistened in the moonlight. I walked around to the front of the house. I looked up at the dark night sky. I couldn't see much because the trees were blocking most of my view. I walked over to the street. I looked up at the shining, starry night sky. I layed down and stared up at the amazing shimmering sight that rested above my head. It took my breath away...

Reviews

[Dove]

When I was younger I used to love the night and I thought it was beautiful... right now it actually terrfies me (I know thats sad) but anyway this was a nice little stroy and it creates a nice vivid image in the readers head. You also did a great job with the details.

[futurepast.]

A very descriptive write, and you put in every motion, feelings that you felt during this small adventure. It is simple, and yet it creates a good image in the reader's mind, due to your specific details. Nice one.

[Annie]

Nice! :) I agree, the night is amazing. Raised interesting thoughts :) Is the night endless? How huge is space? Anyway, haha. Real good! :)