Feelings

It's a bit crude...

These things either are or are not

If they are, nothing can impede them

If they are not, nothing can make them to be

You feel

Or you do not feel

I do not believe in in-betweens

Decide

Whether you feel

Or do not feel

 

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

I'm gonna feel.....if thats OK with you. Not crude really and makes a really sharp point I think. Happy Accident may be right, I notice certain titles really get the impulse click. Like if you throw the F Word or any word having to do with sex in the title.....impulse click is yours. But, some people impulse click those things just to yell at you too, so be careful. Nice work...big fan.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh, Thank You, Craig! I had never thought of myself as strong...but..how glad I am..thank You :) Your words mean much more than I can express :)

[An owl on the moon]

You provoke instrospection here, making one realize the depth of emotion, or surface nature of his or her life. No in-betweens.. yes.. Strong voice.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:) Well, Corey...You're free to Feel :D By all means, my friend..feel so that we can all continue to drink of your wonderful poetry:) I am glad that it's not crude...I was really, really, really bitter at the moment that I wrote this and I thought maybe that bitterness had interfered with my writing. As You know..too little emotion can ruin a piece..but too much can also certainly ruin a piece if not carefully assembled :P

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Maybe so :) I find titling things to be the worst part of writing...thank You:)

[HappyAccident]

I feel like it's not crude as it is funny because when you think about it it's the truth plain and simple.You either feel or you don't .I loved it.Maybe changing the title will enhance the viewing numbers ?