i owe it all to you {this pain}

this is also a song i wrote about some one that i used to care about.

one life to give you
you break me down
cant stand to hold you
why do you refuse to make a sound
im loosing latley
im losing time
im done with all these tears
putting my life on the line

i owe it all to you
and ill that ive been through
i wish that you could feel this too
but its ok im fine
i want you to rewind
.... and remember
your not mine

 

these tears are calling for remorse
but im fine
i need a hand to hold of coarse
so ill just hold on to mine
i dont need anybody
to tell me how to live my life
its ok im still fine
even though i look hurt
death hasnt crossed my mind

i owe it all to you
and ill that ive been through
i wish that you could feel this too
but its ok im fine
i want you to rewind
.... and remember
your not mine

 

and i cant live like this forever
but im finally over pain
because my pain has turned to pleasure
this is such and unusuall game
i need to tell you that im sorry
but i dont want to hear you say
"yes its all right it'll be fine"
because tomorrow only brings me to the time

 

i owed it all to you
all the pleasur i went through
i wished you would feel it too
but its ok im fine
i wanted you to be mine
.... and remember
everything was fine....

but i owe it all to you
and ill that ive been through
i wish that you could feel this too
but its ok im fine
i want you to rewind
.... and remember
your not mine

your not mine.....

just rewind an remember
 

 

your
not
mine...

Author's Note

this is a song i recorded with my band but it wasnt our best so forgive the bad rythm

Reviews

[Annebelle Ashire]

I like the whole thing you did with the chorus,


""i want you to rewind
.... and remember
your not mine
your not mine.....just rewind an remember
your
not
mine...""

it seems like a slap in the face,
but really what I'm seeing here is you telling yourself [ or the girl here telling herself ] that YOU need to
remember that he's not yours..
but that's just one opinion.

~*AC*~