From Space

My first tanka style poem

From Space

An Icon of faith

In chains yet it does float free

Gravity's grasp gone

In the last moments knowing

Dying for all our mistakes

Author's Note

This hit me as I watched the season finale of a sci-fi series I enjoy very much.

Reviews

[B]

Which series ..... this is pretty cool. Please ignore the circus that follows. d much t

[H.L. Cerveise]

Marvel Agents of Shield

[B]

For some reason all I could think about is making mistakes
And how it's isolates a person from the world

Like being lost in space

[H.L. Cerveise]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. This poem allows the reader to get their own personal interruption besides just the surface meaning. I enjoy writing poems like this.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

You have got a flair for poems of this breed too. Pretty nice use of alliteration and amazing ironical lines in there. You have collected all the thoughts and presented them in the form of poetry in a most amazing and engaging manner. Very well penned. Keep writing.

[Aventicus]

Wonderfully composed. The brevity and wording highlights well the themes of sorrow and loss presented here. May I ask what show it is?

[H.L. Cerveise]

I am glad you liked it. It was the Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. show. There are a number of my writings that come from sci-fi or virtual worlds.

[H.L. Cerveise]

I didn't have me tea yet when I wrote the above. Now that I am a little more awake I have more to type. Sci-fi since its inception almost 200 years ago has been exposing its readers to metaphysics. It has raised the collective consciousness of mankind throughout all those years. I will now get off my soap box and get my coffee.