Possession

3. Name a totally useless possession and how you came to acquire it.

A little, wobbly clay circle

with a clay bow on top

its body is green

and the bow is yellow.

Engraved is 'I love you'

in child's handwriting,

a gift from my sister

I'll treasure it for life.

Author's Note

Just one of those things that I'll always keep.

Reviews

[Ees]

Very cute!
Very simple poem- it needed to be to do the love and the piece of pottery justice.
This is such a sweet poem! Great job!

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you! :)

[Aisha Mnd]

Such a sweet poem! I wish I had a younger sister I could dote on. And thank you for the friend request ! :)

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you! :)
Yeah, she's the sweetest!

[SyberRose]

very sweet indeed...loved it...SyberRose

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you,
I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
-Harrisen

[Rita L. Sev]

These are my favorite types of poems (of any writing, really); real little slices of life conveyed simply. I love the sweetness shown - in both the giver of this precious gift, and the receiver. In this world of skewed values, it's nice to see that there are people who know what the truly valuable things are. Beautiful piece, Harrisen!

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you! :)

[SarahV]

This is a cute gift you should keep forever :) Short but sweet poems reflects the seet gift :)

[Harrisen Viator]

Yeah I will, she's little so it's not like she is going to remember making it, but I'll always remember :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this little piece...it IS a treasure.

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you Jacob!
Yeah, it is a treasure, I have it right here on my desk.
-Harrisen

[shallimarRose]

Awww, such a precious gift of love.. xo shallimrRose

[Harrisen Viator]

Yeah, she's the sweetest little girl ever :)