In the search of light

It is the poem about the lost hopes

I went here,i went there..
In the search of light..
I was burnt like a candle..
i spread like smoke..
i flew like a kite..
in the search of light..
on the road of life..
some times i walked
wrong..
some times i walked
right..
in the search of light..
i faced the luck..
i wanted to runaway..
but its grip was tight..
in the search of light..
i went every where..
in mountains and planes..
i look looked at every
sight..
in the search of light..
in my whole life..
i struggled for day..
i fought for the sun.. but
there is night, their is
night..
i went here i went there..
in the search of light..

Author's Note

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Reviews

[tooba ahmed]

Though seems bit tousy yet musical ministry z maintained

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I feel this like melody, it`s very nice and make me think, search of light is one of my favorite topics for poetry...:)