Looking in to eyes.

A poem.

I see your eyes.

I see your soul.

I see your dreams.

I see your sorrows.

I see your hope.

I see your doubt.

I see your kindness.

I see your selfishness.

I see your hate.

I see your love.

Author's Note

I'm new!! Please be kind!!!

Reviews

[Glen]

Perhaps you do more than 'see' when you look into the eyes of another? Feel, sense, wonder, wander, reflect, etc. You might like to try a surprise in your final line? "I know your love"? Writers, of which you are one, write...write, re-write, write again and never stop. We don't write because the world needs it or needs us to write...we write because we MUST write. All the best to you.