Life through a dirty window

I once saw life through a dirty window.

Everything and everyone was dirty,

And had something wrong,

I thought that I was fine,

I thought that I was spotless.

Then I cleaned my windows,

And saw that the fault,

Was not wholey with them,

But mostly with me.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Courtney]

I love the visual that this poem gives of something that's so overlooked.. I really like this poem, good job :)

[Hobbit]

Thank-you for your review!I am so glad that you felt the feeling I was Trying to get across. Thanks!

[Scott Mou]

Looking on one's self and finding faults is a hard thing to do. Trying to convince yourself that others are the ones with faults is easier. I loved this poem and the message(?) that you were trying to get across.

Keep up the good work

[Hobbit]

Thank-you for your review! I'm so glad that you understood the message that I was trying to get across. Thanks!
- Hobbit

[Scott Mou]

Thank you for making such a great poem