The End

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She sings sweet songs of her suffering

The pain racks her body 

Leaves her breathless

She tells tales of a torment never ceasing

Never slowing

Too much but still never enough

Begging now for relief

Author's Note

Please give me feedback :)
I'm not really a poet..

Reviews

[Emily Feret]

Wow great right.

This is just pack full of emotion. Beautiful. tragic.

[paddy d daly]

I love the alliteration in the first line, you pack a lot of emotion into a short few lines, a really good write.

[Demii]

I really like the sense of emotion in it.

[Erik Daniel]

A beautifully written poem. Well done!

[A Foiled Soul]

I loved this. You should focus upon the story and lesson in your poems. Try to weave them in without interrupting the flow of the poem. I really enjoyed this and hope to see more from you.

[Holly]

Thank you so much... Poetry is still a work in progress for me :)