Sweet Nothings

A hopeless romantic, unlucky in love... PLEASE READ & REVIEW :)

Sing me songs of nothings,

Whispered sweetly in my ear.

Build me up, 

To tear me down.

Become my greatest fear.

And even though I see right through,

Your lies still draw me near to you.

They all must fancy me Insane

Because no matter what you do

I fall for you,

You win the game.

My heart sings songs of only you

And that much, 

I would never change.

Reviews

[Jennifer K]

I love this piece of poetry. It really shows how love pulls you in even though it can bring you down. The end speaks very strongly and overall it is just great! Keep writing!!!

[Holly]

Thanks so much :)

[Demii]

This is so sweet, and strong and delicate and really shows that you must of cared or loved someone enough. I loved this " Because no matter what you do, I fall for you, you win the game." This type of love needs to be known everywhere, writing about faithfulness and that your feelings won't change because this one person has your heart, and they will always win the game, its so sweet, and precious. :)

[Holly]

I wrote it with a certain person in mind, but things don't always turn out they we want them to.. Thank you so much for the feedback :)

[Demii]

anytime :)

[A Foiled Soul]

Amazing work. It seems you have delivered once again. I am your greatest admirer.

[Holly]

Thanks... Your comments always make me smile :)

[Barbara Gilmer]

this style of insanity is widespread and irritates the who laid it outta me, Love is giving kind has the best in mind. hate and disrespect, using and abusing does not end in love but obsession. hoping this is an artistic expression, keep writing as this is done well. Barbara

[Kat]

I love this, very beautiful.