Simple Loss

The sculpture is by Richard Reed and sits on my brother's property. Dick is his fine son.

 

 

Tall as scrub pine,

 

Eagle cuts too-spiced air:

 

Simple estrangement.

Reviews

[Poeticme]

Have.ypu ever tried your.hand at hiakus??

Poeticme

[Poeticme]

Enjoyed this short but very deep poem, you captured that one from​ your very soul my lady, thanks for sharing this lovely write

Poeticme

[Emily B]

and I wonder today if loss is really ever simple . . .

[Phibby Venable]

I like, Eagle cuts too-spiced air, very strong!

[James Paulin]

Comparative and interpretive. I like the progression of thought.

[Emily B]

tall as scrub pine, that is tall

simplicity is often enough

[Ed Hart]

see a fool times two
who has nothing else to do
estranged from you