His.

A Poem by honey

Yours, mine, ours…

of all the things i could be in this world, my absolute favorite thing to be…

…was His

© 2025 honey

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Paul Bell

Sounds like a great guy, and one to keep.

Posted 2 Months Ago

2 Months Ago

He is a great guy! keeping him is the plan, if the universe should allow…thank you for reading! �.. read more

emmajoygreen

Gentle and few words.

Perhaps it's how one interprets the word 'His' - capital letter? You say, Yours, mine, ours.. could that be the Lord? Or are you thinking of someone nearer? Perhaps this poem is intended to make a reviewer think for more than a second. In fact more than a second from me. Interpretation can walk a roundabout path!

Posted 2 Months Ago

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2 Months Ago

hi emma! i’m so glad you were able to pull up a chair and stay for a while! when writing this piec.. read more

RomaJ

So simple, yet so profound. ‘His’ could be a person, a presence, or a promise, and you make it feel like the safest, happiest place to be.

Posted 2 Months Ago

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2 Months Ago

exactly! and it’s indeed the safest, happiest place to be. 🥹

Travis Gibson (poetic h..

Feels like a farewell... or a reflection of a period gone by. Palpable.

Posted 2 Months Ago

2 Months Ago

oh, it’s far from a farewell! the wording is past-tense, but these are current sentiments.

Buddhistboy73

Ok...short but sweet .....
I liked this for those reasons....:)

Sometimes less is more and I feel the "less" here speaks volumes and allows the reader to formulate their own visions as to what that could be...

Cheers!

BB73