when you see the moon

when you see the moon

A Poem by honey
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for distant lovers…

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before there was breath, there was us -
two sparks tangled in the quiet dark,
born from the same burst of creation,
separated only so we could learn the ache of reunion.
across lifetimes, across light-years, i still feel your pull.
when you see the moon, i hope you think of me.

we learned to speak in echoes -
your laughter found me through the stars,
a sound the universe still hums in my chest.
even silence bends toward your name.
when you laugh with the moon, i hope you think of me.

i’ve seen you in dreams the color of twilight,
your body swaying with the silver wind,
dancing where the ocean meets the night -
as if the world itself were made from our remembering.
when you dance with the moon, i hope you think of me.

some nights i feel your whisper through the dark,
gentle as breath, sharp as longing.
i pour my soul into the sky and hope she carries it to you -
my hearts message, hidden within her glow.
when you whisper to the moon, i hope you think of me.

and when the stars forget their names,
and even time exhales its final breath,
i’ll still reach for you -
a tide drawn to its twin in the sky,
a promise etched in the shimmer of eternity.

and when you have no more words,
only the unsteady beats of your yearning heart,
when you cry to the moon, i hope she hears your plea.

when you see the moon, i hope you think of me…

© 2025 honey


Author's Note

honey
thank you for reading

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"I pour my soul into the sky and hope she carries it to you." This is poetry. Your imagery, tone, pace... and the longing kicks you in the chest! Standing O!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

honey

2 Months Ago

thank you so much! this truly means so much…i spent time with the moon last night, while missing s.. read more
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

2 Months Ago

Your muses and talent made true art here.
honey

2 Months Ago

i truly do appreciate this…thank you again for reading

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honey

somewhere in the clouds, HI



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