Energy

Energy
Inside of me
Ripping through my veins
The screams, tearing seams, rising dreams
The awakening of an animal inside of me

 

Thunder crash
Make it last
Quench my thirst
My tired body fasting
So long without this passion

 

The beast is raging
Let it out
I’ve never felt so alive
Don’t let this moment die
Rejuvenate my soul
Make me feel whole

 

Echoes sounding in my head
Don’t think I’ll ever go to bed
This fire burning in my heart
Is all I need for a day to start

 

 

Desperate to satisfy endless hunger
Leaving each storm with new wonder
Eternal rain on a glorious parade

Author's Note

Rock. Metal. Grunge. J-Rock. Heavy Metal. Goth Metal. Screamo. Hard Rock. Emo. Need I go on?
Music feeds the soul, my friends.

Reviews

[Stephanie]

This is really dramatic, the way it just hits you in the face! I loved it. Awesome piece :]

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And that's filled with energy lol
Anyone would have guessed it's about music in the way you describe this passion
Music really makes us feel alive
Well done!

[Marlena]

OMNOMNOM. Music is better than sleep for me, all I can say. I can't wait until Idol Night, its going to be so much fun. This was great for describing the music in all of us. ^^

[Wingless Angel of Dream..]

OH WOW! i like it. LOTS of energy (no duh!! i can really feel it raging. i got that night club feel, like heavy metal or rock sounds... something like that in a night club, idk. but i also would like to tell you, is that it sounds like one of those snappy finger poems in a poetry club where ppl read poems. you know those places? yea it sounds like something to be read there. girl u'll go places!

[Aekmy]

"The screams, tearing seams, rising dreams"

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"Eternal rain on a glorious parade"

I really like the first line because it is so original, something about it just pops out.
I love my second favorite line because you mentioned the rain. I'm a sucker for a poem with a good rain analogy or mentioning.
I adore the phrase, 'don't rain on my parade' and you've won yourself a place in my favorites. I really like this one.

Wonderfully done, as usual. :D

-Madeline
P.s: Sorry if I'm bothering you xD

[Winter Poison]

Wow, that was super intense. I wouldn't have guessed it was about music if you hadn't told me, which is good! It means you wrote something that can have a different significance or meaning to someone else.