Bliss

There is a certain beauty
In the rise and fall of the waves
We watch them together
Hand in hand in rocking chairs
On the porch of our little house

I turn to find you asleep
And laugh to myself as I stand
And walk bare-foot to the beach
The sand dancing between my toes
I let the salty water lap at my feet
I breathe in the sweet air
And turn to find you’re gone

A kiss on my cheek
You’ve come to my side
We run along the shore
Like young children playing tag

 

I lace my fingers with yours
And sit in the sand
You lower yourself beside me
And we share a soft kiss
And we watch the sunset
Settled in our bliss

Author's Note

...I really needed to write something and this is what I came up with. I feel like such a sap but oh well XD
Comments and crit appreciated.

Reviews

[Aekmy]

This is very nice. Sugar sweet in a way.

[THE LOST ROSE]

I agree with Angela the imagery is awesome. Sappy? Maybe but how many movie scenes are shown to the audience to get them to come watch that movie? There is a huge audience for that stuff. Guess what some of them are on this site. Great poem!

[Marlena]

*glomps* SAP AHOY~

I liked it, made me laugh a little cuz I wrote something inspired by the sea today too xD Nifty work ^~^

[A]

I love the imagery in this poem! I can picture it perfectly! Great poem! :)