Let Us Walk Through The Sands of Forever

Let us walk through the sands of forever
Together, hand-in-hand
Let us forget all our earthly troubles
And watch our worries melt away
Let us sail through the seas of eternity
And feel the waves rock us to sleep
Let us rest in the arms of our lovers
Enjoy the sunset on the beach
Let us live simply on this island—our own
Let us find comfort in this beauty—our home

Author's Note

I wrote this quite a while ago in theology class one day and I just found it in my folder. Comments and crit appreciated <3

Reviews

[Aekmy]

I believe we've all wrote about walking hand in hand in the sand with a lover.
Great write.

[Marlena]

Aww I really liked it XD Very cute, I just feel like it could've kept going a little longer, like...I dun know, the ending is fast, I guess. Idk I'm tired so I don't know if that makes sense xD Nifty work though, "Let us sail through the seas of eternity" was my favorite line, very pretty. :)

[Jessie]

I love this poem, it gives such a feeling of peace, nice write and thanks for sharing. tc...