Safe

crawling. walking. running. falling.
crying. screaming. yelling. writhing.
fire falling. sky bleeding.
clouds crying. water saving.
flip the switch. darken the room.
breathing. seething. anger. burning.
sin. repent. forgiveness. learning.
begging. pleading. sobbing. shouting.
dark consuming. shadows thriving.
light blinding. sun saving.
see the angels. watch them fly.
staring. wondering. wishing. longing.
amazing. angels. flying. free.
praying. forgiving.
breathing. calm.
accepting. faith.
relaxing. safe.
finally. safe.

Author's Note

I was in two completely different moods from the time I started this poem yesterday to the time I finished it up today. I think it makes for an interesting final piece. Just a little experiment I suppose. Comments and crit appreciated :3

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

I love how you condensed and finalized each emotion, leaving the reader with the full weight of each feeling....no other explainations, or extra words to clutter up or distract from getting the full impact of the piece.
Great job!

k:)

[Marlena]

I can tell you were in a different mood XD It goes from like...pure devastation to hope. I really liked this one though, you should totally do more like it :) Probably one of my favorites from you :D