The Box

Sitting in the box

When the principal comes in

Wondering when he leaves

Reviews

[Dearantlers]

What a great poem, though I don't think most people will get it. I miss the box. They should bring it over from the middle school to the high school so that we can still have it. :)

[Starscraper]

I miss it too and my mom said they took it off the stage, so who knows where it is. They might as well bring it to the high school! But I think it's great! Were you there when this happened?

[Dearantlers]

What! No box! That's sad. :( I don't think I was in the actual box. I was outside of it playing or something. But I have been in there plenty of times with you. :)

[Starscraper]

I know I said that too! Good times though!

[Calibaster]

great, but kinda short.

[Starscraper]

It's supposed to be short. It's a haiku. 5 syllables in the first line 7 in the next and 5 in the last.

[LunarSong]

Then a cell phone rings
Fingers crossed that he didn't hear
Giggles when he leaves

:) just a suggestion. I miss the box
R.J.

[Starscraper]

I miss it too. That is pretty awesome It even matches!

[LunarSong]

Yeah, except I messed up on the syllables, oh well :) It's kinda strange that we miss the box.

[Starscraper]

I agree very strange. And I don't think the new kids know anything about the box.

[LunarSong]

New kids in Orchestra?

[Starscraper]

Yeah but like kids who are in middle school who weren't there when we were. And so they have no idea the box exists.

[LunarSong]

Is it not still in the room?

[Starscraper]

It is it's just that nobody messes with it anymore so nobody knows it's hollow inside.

[LunarSong]

Are you sure? That's sad, though probably good for your mother.

[Starscraper]

Yeah I'm pretty sure. It is sad that nobody knows about it. But when I say 'The Box" the little middle schoolers wonder what i'm talking about. And I think it is definitely good for my mother.

[LunarSong]

So I guess your not going to show them? Though I guess if you did they probably wouldn't get obsessed over it like we were.

[Starscraper]

My mom would probably get mad at me if I did because they most likely would get obsessed just like us. And whose stand even got hidden in there? I don't remember.

[LunarSong]

Some one hid someones stand in there? I can't remember either.

[Starscraper]

Yeah it was ridiculous. But kind of funny. It took forever for them to figure out where it was. I'll ask somebody who would remember.

[Dearantlers]

I love it your added part! The box brings back such good memories. :)

[LunarSong]

I know right?!

[Dearantlers]

I can't help but smile and laugh when I think of all the fun we had there. I just can't believe its gone!!

[LunarSong]

Yeah... It's sometimes sad when time moves on.

[Dearantlers]

I know. Really sad sometimes.