For Mother's Gone Ahead

Poem for those whonhavve lost their mother's

FOR MOTHER'S GONE AHEAD

You may not be with us.

You may have gone ahead,

but our love for you has stayed

with us, in our hearts and in 

in our heads.

We remember your touch.

Your lips upon our cheeks.

Your love and your guidance,

our catch up's every week.

We miss the phone not ringing, 

not hearing your voice the other end,

still writing text messages with no

number with which to send.

We love our departed Mother's.

We miss them everyday,

but smile in the knowledge

we will be together with them one day.

Author's Note

A bpoem for those out there today who have lost their mothers .

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

when i was 2 i lost my father, i never experienced what is a father's love... feeling speechless....there are few people who can touch our hearts with their simple words and you are certainly one of them... my hat goes off to you.... thank you so much for this heart warming write.... it reminded me of my father.... thank you...

[hcarson]

aww IP your words aree always so lovely, i can't imagine how it is for people that have lost a parent..must be so sad as well as hard..in turn, my hat goes off to all you that manage to get through these tough time

[Inject Positivity]

well i believe it's people like you who encourages us to gain that strength along with God...

[hcarson]

aww thank you IP, so ddo you with your lovely words and positive outlook :)

[Sangeetha]

Sad and beautiful tribute I've imagined thousands of times what it would be like to lose my Mother but when that day comes I don't think I'll ever be ready

[hcarson]

no, i should imagine a person never is, no matter how old the parent is, still must be so difficult. thank you for your lovely words :)

[Sangeetha]

your welcome Ms.H

[Robert Parlange]

Beautiful poem. Think I'll go visit Mom tomorrow. She's 92.

[hcarson]

Thank you robert...wow 92... Thats quite an age, bet she has some tales to tell!!

[Robert Parlange]

Yup. I'll be writing more about Mom and Dad.

[hcarson]

Look forward to you sharing them, i enjoy reading your things, your a lovely writer :)

[Gee]

Really well done,this will ring true for so many."A mothers passing" was written from a male perspective (me) so is a more general view rather than that of mother/daughter.If you get a mo have a peek and see what you think.Again,well done

[hcarson]

Thank you Gee foir your comments and i will look at "A Mother's Passing" immediatly, i love other peoples perspectives

[hcarson]

I love your poem, best i read so far!!!

[Gee]

Thanks,I'm flattered (might even blush!)

[hcarson]

I mean it, it is fantastic! Your a damn good writer!

[V]

Beautifully sad poem. It's brave to write about something that might hurt or contain sad memories. But nicely done, not too depressive but a light sense of letting go and musing about the past.

[hcarson]

It was an awkward one as i havent lost my mother (thankfully) but a lady mentioned putting one up for those that had so gave it a shot. Thsnks for your comments so appreciated

[V]

Ah ok. Well, nicely done, anyway. I'm glad you didn't lose her.