Lumps 'n' Bumps

bored half way through class...not at all thinking of going out to lunch.....

Lumps 'n' Bumps

lumps, bumps, curves galore,

I have enough, don't need more...

just one more chocolate - 

a little slice of cake...

surely not a lot of difference,

these little treats will make!

I revel in the sweetness,

the crumbly delight - 

then acknowledge the naughtiness

of my secret nibbling through the night.

I sneek back up the stairs,

climb back into bed.

The thoughts of creamy chocolate

still swirling round my head.

Author's Note

any comments and criticisms welcome :)

Reviews

[Jacob Clifford]

Very well said and fits like a glove. I've never had a particularly strong sweet tooth, especially when it comes to chocolate, but I know the feeling well enough to say that this poem tells it like it is.

[hcarson]

I dont have a sweet tooth either, now savoury stuff on the other hand..different story haha...thank you for reading, much appreciated

[Bacchus]

crap- i need to go workout...

[hcarson]

Aha...me to..;)

[Shabeeh Haider]

sweets are so tempting especially chocolate. How many time have I tried to reduce taking sweets. It works but not in front of chocolate.
A very lovely write. This poem has a good flow to it and a fine use of rhymes.

[hcarson]

thank you so much shabeeh, you are right..chocolate should never be a part of any diet unless its to eat it haha, far to nice to waste :)

[Inject Positivity]

Ah! Chocolates! the unforgettable tasty pieces that makes us happy no matter what situation we are in... Makes me remind of my childhood days(we are all still child in terms of eating chocolates)... Lovely...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[hcarson]

especially if that chocolate has crispy orange bits in it..yum :)

[Gee]

Morning,you be careful you'll end up the size of a bus !!!! Enjoyed the read

[hcarson]

no chance in my house...kids get there first haha thanks for reading and the review, much appreciated :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

second stanza i think you meant "naughtiness"

sweets are such an addiction...should i get up and raid the cookie jar, or stay in bed and try to sleep...

we found the answer in this poem...

j.

[hcarson]

Aha, i certainly did mean that, thank you for pointing that out i missed that several times :) thank you for reading and reviewing, very much appreciated :)