Never forget you (senryu)

Another practise piece

Never forget you (senryu)

Never forget you

You are important as well

So many forget

Author's Note

All criticismms welcome

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Simple words but I think very encouraging for a person who is down in life... I believe it's very strong and assuring...

I would advise you to find something for the last line, more catchy something... But as you said it's a practice piece so it goes really well... You'll get there...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[hcarson]

Yea i get you..i was going for a kind of bleak feel to the ending if u get me as to forget yourselfis sad really but i see what your saying for sure. My words always tend to be simple as you have probably noticed already lol...not sure why i do that..sort of habit i guess or ingrained style lol...loved your mystic morning..fantastic piece!!!