Serenity comes

Senryu done from a word given me by INJECT POSITIVITY

Serenity comes (senryu)

Serenity comes

As morning light befalls us

Dreams lifted away

Author's Note

Comments and criticisms welcome

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is more senryu...as haiku is strictly about nature...senryu has human elements..

nonetheless...there is something about waking to serenity..either that dawn chases away the bad dreams, or embraces the sweet dreams as we wake and feel refreshed.

j.

[hcarson]

Ahh i did wonder, iam new to this and get confused which are which as i have terrible memory, thank you for pointing that out so i can alter it 😊, also thank you for your comment, much appreciated 😊

[Inject Positivity]

So very insightful Helen, you brought the imagery so beautifully and cleanly... I'm so very happy to see the way you are showing your passion in your works now... Lovely...

Sincerely
Dhiman