serpent (cinquain)

a new form of poem inject positivity has been teaching me

SERPENT (CINQUAIN)

SERPENT

SLIT EYES, FORK TONGUE

SLITHERING AND TWISTING

SHIVERS UP YOUR SPINE, FROZE IN PLACE.

VIPER

Author's Note

THANK YOU TO INJECT POSITIVITY FOR GIVING ME A BETTER NOUN THAN I WAS INITIALLY WORKING WITH :)

Reviews

[Shannon]

Ip sure is nice, isn't he? Alliteration everywhere! Emphathizes the 'ssss'.

[hcarson]

well i hade it where i had a whole row of 's' but then my synonym didnt match my noun lol so changed it. hes helped recently in opening up these forms..i heard of them before but always thought they sounded confusing ...he must have patience of saint to explain them to me..you no how dopey i am lol!!