My Flame of Desire

When two flames unite. This poem is now published in the "Stars in our Heart, Ambition"

My Flame of Desire

 

 

You are my love, my raging fire.

 

You are my only true hearts desire.

 

You are like a flame burning bright, that never dies throughout the night.

 

When our flames unite together, our passion burns bright forever.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem for my husband! Through this poem my heart speaks to him. This poem has been published in the "Stars in our Heart, Ambition" book. I hope you enjoy this poem!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

And you are a good writer...Bravo

[R J Askew]

Blood hell, one lucky husband! Keep that fire a-burning! But don't wear him out!

[Shy Girl]

Love how you connected the thoughts to almost be one complete line. It's as if you were staring at your husband without him realizing it and just writing what you see and feel within that one glance in time. Really beautiful piece :)

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and lifting... the meaningul depth of love and passion's fire expressed in vivid words... Don't ever, ever let that flame weaken in the world's cold winds..

[Eagle Cruagh]

In a short poem you have lit a fire.
The poem expresses burning passion
and a "heart`s desire", a flame that
unites together.
Excellent writing, it tells a story of need
and desire leaving nothing unsaid.
Beautiful .
----- EAgle Cruagh