~*~ Will You Be There ~*~

~*~ Will You Be There ~*~

 

When the loneliness creeps in

will you be there?

When I need a smile to brighten

my day

will you be there?

When I need someone to be there

just to sit quietly beside me

will you be there?

When my world seems as if

its falling apart

will you be there?

When I walk the many paths

of this life

will you be there?

When I take my last breath

upon this earth

When the Great Spirit

calls my name

will you be there?

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a genuine and heartfelt quest ~ I ike the ambugity~ how you leave it up to the reader to interpret of whom or of what these questions are asked~

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

That was realy good. So heart felt, so smooth and calm. I like it :)

[cheeks]

i like the concept of the poem, but the repeating of the line "will you be there?" could be less used. for example, using it at the beginning and end only instead of every other line, other than that it has a good sense.