**SOULS**

                     **SOULS**

 

 

When does one feel the inner beauty
of another
Feel that they are both part of the
same heartbeat
To touch one another with only
their minds
To feel such closeness that your minds
are entertwined
Moving together as one body...
one mind
Every thought, feeling, emotion
merged so deeply
You can't tell where one ends
and the other begins.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

A beautiful poem indeed. Such frustration and longing! I like it.

[Loner]

Beautifull expression it feels like LOVE is pouring out from this poem.

[Silent Siren]

This is a really beautiful piece and I can relate to it so much. Amazing flow, rhythm and such.

It's wonderfully simple and yet has that quality of depth to it.
I guess this write describes how two people come together in love, to form one.

I agree with this write in many ways, but I also think that one can be an individual within a loving relationship as well.