My Fantasy

I was in my rhyming phase when I wrote this so please don't judge too harshly haha

I care too much,

way more than I should.

If there was an easy way to tell him,

believe me i would.

 

This life-a fantasy,

those words seemed reality.

Friendship caught in the crossfire,

us being the only fatality.

 

I wish our fingers would touch

the way i want them to.

This being a fantasy love

but all for who?

 

It's my fantasy,

they have no part in.

It's him I love,

and who i want to win.

Author's Note

I was in my rhyming phase so please don't judge my rhyme scheme or anything too harsh I mean tell me if it's wrong just say it nicely is all I ask:)

Reviews

[The Slayer]

It reminds me of the guy I like. The rhyming is very good.

[soliloquy]

This is sweet, with some sizzle to it. Nice.

[zaneybear]

thank you haha:)