A Peek At Heaven

A Peek At Heaven

A Story by BlueShadow

A Peek At Heaven


One day, John Alexander was biking for miles and came upon a field that was beautiful in color and the diversity of flowers it had. He was amazed at the vibrant colors the daffodils, the tulips, and the roses were. The flowers were beautiful, bright, and varied in shape and size. The field was so calm and still in terms of its motion and energy. The field was extremely green, with bits or yellow, purple, and red covering the field here and there. The field smelled like grass, an earthy smell that was fragrant. The field was extremely stunning in terms of how perfectly sized, placed, and located it was in the city. It was a bastion of natural goodness. John simply adored it.

John Alexander was a very kind, polite, and helpful man who went out of his way to help those in suffering or poverty. He loved riding his blue bicycle and encountering different neighborhoods, roads, and streets. The bicycle was amazing for its endurability and speed. When he reached the field, he was stunned by its magnificence and beauty. He took some pictures and stored them on his phone. John was interested in the field’s peacefulness and decided to go on it. He walked on the field when suddenly a few rain clouds which looked like billows of smoke came over the field and impressed John with its ominous color and speed. The clouds came over the field and made John scared. A lightning bolt struck him and he blacked out.

While he was unconscious, he saw a bright, white light and saw Jesus on a few clouds staring at him. John was in heaven, he thought to himself. John was stunned by heaven’s mysterious nature and its golden roads and city buildings. He was in heaven, so he thought, and was stunned by the city’s extraordinary beauty and charm.

He awoke and he was covered in rain and headed home. He became a Christian later that day and became devout in praying and obeying the ten commandments every day. He was so grateful to be alive and in his comfortable, plush home.

© 2021 BlueShadow


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Added on June 27, 2021
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BlueShadow
BlueShadow

Gainesville, FL



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Hello! I am a Korean-American man who wrote BlueShadow because I love the English language's look, sound, and feel. I loved writing BlueShadow because I love writing in general. In BlueShado.. more..