Morget Samson

Morget Samson was Savon’s father and a Wizard Elder. Morget Samson had published several books on Future Magic, and was keen on developing the world of magic to such an extent that Savon didn’t think it was possible. Savon admired his dad’s courage, intelligence, and stature and loved looking at his dad write on scrolls and loved his dad’s handmade books, the feeling of which made him amazed with disbelief. Morget Samson was a Wizard Elder because he knew 100 spells and could use any staff, from oak to willow and steel to fire staffs. Morget Samson was extraordinarily talented at making his magic go by well, and could be seen in the Practice Room casting spells on trapped imps and goblins. Morget Samson was a wonderful magician who knew the ins and outs of ancient and contemporary magic very well. He loved making people stunned at his wonderful magical ability.

Morget Samson loved wielding steel staffs because they were sturdy, useful, and interesting to look at. Steel staffs were made of steel and could be used to manipulate rocks and stone and metals. They were quite useful when battling giants and trolls who would harass you if you went outside the castle. Morget Samson loved his steel staff which was given to him by a Wizard Elder and made him feel so good about his life. Morget Samson was a remarkably versatile and experienced magician and knew so much about spells and spell books and their limitless applications. Morget Samson loved his life as a wizard and making people love his magic. Morget Samson published lots of books on Future Magic, in other words, the magic of later times. Morget Samson was Savon’s mentor and taught his son all the tricks and tips that he would need to become a Wizard Elder himself, too.

Morget Samson was extremely grateful for his life as a Wizard Elder and decided to go on a quest to Varchia, a state in the north of the castle. There he would see snow covered mountains and beautiful valleys and castles that were in ruins and of course, Snow Giants. Snow Giants were huge giants that made loved living in the snow and made their homes there. They were extremely powerful and could pack a huge punch and make people stunned at their ability to kill and cause destruction on such a massive scale. Snow Giants were incredibly strong and knew how to kill unsuspecting humans with a single cast of Freeze. Snow Giants were remarkably strong and knew how to kill humans very easily and on the whim of their mind. Morget was going to go to Varchia to face one of these foes, hopefully collecting a Trichwort which was an ancient and very good smelling herb that could be used in all kinds of situations. Trichwort was a wonderful and amazing herb that made people amazed at the wonderful properties and applications it had in spells. Zaphyr Castle was short on Trichwort, and people were in demand of it because they needed it to cast certain spells, like Confusion and Chaos and Control. Morget Samson was in need of Trichwort, and he was determined to kill some Snow Giants to get what he needed.

He headed out the front door and was excited to go to the outside. The weather was chilly but not too cold, and Morget grabbed his cloak together and headed on outside so that he would feel good about himself and his life. Morget went to Jastin Mountain where there were scores of Snow Giants, a sight to be seen. Morget stunned a Snow Giant and collected a Trichwort that it dropped when it died, and was so much in awe of the wonderful smell and appearance of the herb. Morget knew the Wizard Elders of the castle were going to be happy and stunned with the Trichworts and how delicious they were and how they could be used in potions and enchantments. Morget was so excited to be able to use Trichwort for the first time in a long time and was excited about its medicinal properties and usage in potions like Green and Orange Potions. Morget loved his life so much as a Wizard Elder and loved the feeling of defeating foes like Snow Giants and Ice Witches, both of which would scare the daylights out of any ordinary wizard. Morget was remarkably good at casting magic, and made people know he was good at it, too.

Morget went to his room on the second floor and went to his desk to write a letter. Morget wrote about how he wanted to see if he could make a Purple Potion, one potion kind that had never been made before and was excited about life as a wizard. Purple Potions were extremely interesting to think about, as they had never been actually made but were wonderful for insect bites and spider infestations. Purple Potions were a wonderful and excellent remedy to heal all kinds of diseases and problems. Morget knew that it was time to begin trying to make Purple Potions, something he had never done before.

Morget went to the third floor to the herb room and selected a jamwurt, hicherbesrry, and doxyla. These three herbs would be used together with Pure Water to make a potion that was potent, interesting, and wonderful. Morget was so excited about his life as a potion maker and wanted to inspire other magicians on how magic could be fun, including his son. Morget talked with the other elders of the castle and were stunned to see their approval for the experimentation and concoction of a new and wonderful potion that would make people stunned at Morget’s mind and wit. Morget loved making potions and was so happy to make the Purple Potion. It was going to take time and effort, but Morget was hardworking and diligent, so it would only take sometime and effort to make such a wonderful potion.

Reviews

[Steve Cook]

The character study shows a vivid imagination, nicely detailed. But I do see a few problems, word choice being chief among them: "amazed with disbelief" in the first paragraph, "hardworking and diligent" in the last paragraph, the two words in each case are similar in meaning; "yielding" at the top of the second paragraph I believe you mean "wielding." Also you have many repetitions throughout the chapter: I counted six times you used the word "stunned," four times for "amazed" or "amazing," and ten times for "wonderful" in this short piece, twice in the same sentence in some places; the sentence "Trichwort was a wonderful and amazing herb that made people amazed at the wonderful properties and applications it had in spells." is another repetition of "amaze" and "wonderful," plus "amazed" is used incorrectly here, try something like "Trichwort was a wonderful and astounding herb that amazed people with its magical properties and applications in spells."
I read several instances of phrases being repetitive: "Morget Samson had published several books on Future Magic..." in the first paragraph and "Morget Samson published lots of books on Future Magic..." in the second paragraph; there are others. Basically you need to expand your vocabulary, use a thesaurus and dictionary, and watch out for repetitions covering the same material.
I do believe you have a good imagination, it shows in the work. Good luck!