Skybeams

The sky was rising today

Like a puff of smoke in hazy air

Beauty abounded, wonder flourished

Giant clouds of rain thundered

I love the kindness of the rain

Giving life to the ground

I love the clean and kind air

Giving life to the people here

The sky shows love of generosity

Beams come forth like sunlight

Different colors, different wavelengths

Buoyant among sadness and despair

Reviews

[CM Joshua]

I loved the little descriptions in this in this!
You did well to stick to the motifs of weather while also tying specific feelings of happiness and other positive ideas and emotions to them!