Sad Souls Club

Just a silly small piece.

           Human, the sad ghost

        Human loves hot chocolate, 

but hot chocolate always makes him dirty.

     Human doesn't love getting dirty. 

So, does human love hot chocolate, after all?

            

               Dog, the little fly

 Dog used to watch her favorite human being all the time,

      Until out of nowhere he snapped 

  And killed her mom during her morning workout flight. 

                    Poor Dog!

            

               Pyramid, the cube

    Pyramid doesn't really understand why he

       can't be as thin as his cousin square. 

                  Poor Pyramid!

                

               Freezer, the lighter

  Freezer has never been able to connect with anyone, 

Apparently everytime someone actually pushes a little harder

 Trying to get to know him, they end up getting burnt. 

                  Poor Freezer!

                                              

                                      

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

In a way, I found this amusing and well-written as I like the repetition of it. The repetition gave this poem a nice rhythm or beat to it.

[hypochondrita]

Thanks! This one has a special place in my heart for being a simple silly easy read, glad you enjoyed it.

[DRAGO]

hmmm, lol lol lol lol lol

[Samantha Anabella]

This is quite the chuckle to your self and sort of confusing writing piece, I would improve on what you mean throughout the poem but other wise your pretty good. If you ever get a chance check out my book, thanks! Welcome to Writers Cafe!

[hypochondrita]

Thanks, samantha! This is actually an adaptation of some drawings of mine which is why it's kinda messy, I appreciate your honesty and will surely check out your book. :)

[Samantha Anabella]

Your welcome! And that would explain it, but it still made me laugh out of silliness so you must be a good writer! Ha!